Lol this is very true about flies lol i gotta say it's very cute in the extreme! :) i could NEVER come up with this type of poem i'm more on the typical style a poet goes to love, sadness, darkness, and explicit lol but i gotta say this is very imaginative! :) 5/5

Queen Ash

You can take the most seemingly trivial or unworthy subject and make it a real treat to read! What an amazing talent.

I thought this poem was well written and amusing, my favorite part was "jump on mustaches" *giggle*

Fuuny how I searched for a deeper meaning and found it lol