So so sad, a very heartfelt write

Black silhouettes appear
dancing on the glow
of the midnight moon.
Their joyful laughter
and innocent hearts
mesmerises the world tonight.

^^that is my favorite part of this, I can picture those precious little ones and hear their laughter...

this is beautifully written Saffie

:( Tragic when children die too soon, especially by something as horrific as what happened....I can not comment on the situation if you are writing about the Newton CT shooting, I burst into tears every time its talked about, however, this poem, absolutely wonderful....You dressed your words very beautifully!! Velvet, and diamonds, the scene was just beautiful as it should be since its a poem dedicated to precious little ones...

You keep growing and growing Saff, I love it! :)

Saffie, this was beautiful yet heart wrenching...
the recent events are tragic and even more so at the young age of those little souls.

This was precious, this is just beautiful.

x