Comments : One night is all it took!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Beautifully written.Sweet and charming:)
    I would suggest you to divide the piece accordingly as it rhymes:)
    Good work^^

    • 10 years ago

      by Donnie

      I think i did what you asked of me whit this poem? Does this look better?

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    I agree with Amreen and suggest u to do the same!
    Over all, its a sad but good poem!