Comments : The Magician and the Queen

  • 12 years ago

    by Let It Be

    This is beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Loved this, it was magical and romantic.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is different and lovely:)
    You always put forth your best my friend:)
    keep writing...

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Finding that true love which seems to elude our
    eyes and another way I see it, is like falling for someone's words and going after a dreamless dream...just my interpretation. All in all it leaves the reader with a yearning heart...take care :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I like the rhymes in this piece, I see you are into brevity. This was like a story that I enjoyed reading.

    • 12 years ago

      by yogi73

      Hi Everlasting,

      Yes, for me, less is more :)

      sorry, if I came across a little harsh. You have wonderful and deep imagery in your poems.

      take care,
      zach

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is a magical little verse. I loved the unusual use of ryhme here it made the poem flow beautifully. As for the story well, love is very elusive but sometimes, after we've journeyed near and far trying to find it...it's there right under our noses and we wonder why we took so long to see it.

    This is well.....MAGICAL!