Hey Tim.
Great piece of poetry. Very well written and I liked the message behind it. You do a fine job in writing your poems and thank you for sharing them with us. Keep up the wonderful work and take care always!
Kind regards,
Kristina

cute poem =) lovely =) gave it a 5 =) hope u can visit mine =) ciao

Great poem and it was very well written ! Keep up the good work
Thanks for the comments

That was such a cute poem. You know it's a good poem because as i was reading it i could put a picture in my head of what you were talking about. It was lovely.

Aw, that was a SWEET poem. I wish I had a guy to tell me that. I just have these retarded gangsta idiots. :( I love your work.

Awwwwww... I'm so envious of you're girl-friend right now . She is a lucky lady, and if she has you twisted up in love this way you're a lucky man . I really don't no how to comment or compliment you anymore . You tend to leave me speechless . Only faults that I can see that you have is Capitilization, but most of all of us has that problem . Don't even sweat it in due time you can remedy that fault . Keep up the excellent work .

You're friend
Letty

Aw... prettyful!