The image I got from this was a dance of unrevealed love

Loved this

This is lovely and beautiful. your words have magic to depict this pure love:)
Excellent piece:)

Such beauty in this piece, Andrea, it made me feel so warm and calm but the essence of a little sadness also made me tear up a little, the combination in this piece is perfect.

Love it!! and ya know I love you
x

I really enjoy a good love poem and relish in their content.
In your first stanza, I am not sure but I think peacock together would be more appropriate.

A jeweled lover
always looks her
best,when waiting
in cool rains of a somber
sky

Third stanza perfect

He calms the quivers
of her wanton ways,
slowly cascading her
in a silent waltz
of conversation.

They glide in the night;
a lover's masquerade.

This is an awesome Poem
Peace and Blessings