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Nik, this is a gr8 poem. I especially liked when u compared the struggle with "the monster" to a chess game. Brilliant!! I could almost feel the emotions as I read it. It only stinks that u had to experience such hurt. Truly feel for u. But excellent work

I loved your poem the flow of emotions

Although this is heartbreaking, it's absolutely beautiful! You've expressed yourself so well. I love the imagery you've conveyed and your use of chess as an example.. how so very true it is..

I gave my heart
to a monster,
expecting him to change his nature
for my ignorance.

^^ I loved the way you started this write as it completely consumed me and left me wanting more. The feelings these 4 lines conveyed, as if you knew he mistreated people in the past, but hoped possibly you could be the one he would cherish.. Ah I've been there.

Then you go on expressing these feelings of hopelessness so vividly I could feel them myself. So heartbreaking!

I can understand it very touching and keeps going on with a story was need to be heard for somebody to relate to it

The words in this write shows the depth of your hurt and in the end it is the person who has done all this atrocities falls into an inescapable pit...take care dear.