I love it it makes me want to daydream.

WoW!! What a nice piece!! It totally speaks love, promise and hope. I loved reading it as a pure extract of your relation with your daughters. They must be proud of you through all life. One point, the words "Fairy tale" should be one word as "fairytale"
Brilliant work.

Both of you wrote beautifully :)

This seems to have been written by an old "soul" a woman much wiser than her years. I wonder where all the ladies like you were when I was younger. I loved it Bravo! encore ! more more!

I agree with my friend khalid
brilliant work..

Excellent!
So brilliantly written.. >.<