by Tara Kay
Andrea, This piece felt soothing in its flow yet disturbing in the imagery... i had this thought of an angel being taken advantage of, falling from the skies and landing on the paitings of van gogh... |
by Amreen
This poem can have many interpretations and it seems to be that a person who is sad and confused is waiting for a burst of good to happen to her. |
by Baby Rainbow
This is very powerful Maple, you have described a character with such pain inside that she feels she is so confused about where to go in life and what the future holds. It comes across like she feels trapped. "a tangled webbed disaster" - maybe she feels stuck inside a certain situation because she has no control over it. |