Snowman...(String Senryu)

by ah satan 666   Dec 19, 2012


The crisp white blanket
refracts the moonlight, the earth
Sparkles like diamonds.

Charcoal eye's almost
look mortal, black gems stones dance
to the robins song.

Exciting cheers from
the children, awaiting the
bearded man in red.

Differences put
aside, as family and
friends come together.

The festive season
is here. Peace and love to all
man kind, is the hymn.

I stand proud in my
top hat and cravat, angels
sing a song of hope.

Tribulations are
met with heart felt prayers, melting
me... The coldest man.

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* 1st club Win!! *
~ Thank you guys :D ~
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Andrea's Holiday Fun...
Club challenge.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Congrats on the challenge win my dear, this was a really lovely piece, it was warm and thoughtful and had a really nice message, to just live in harmony, especially in this season, when so much breaks our hearts, we need that little bit of love.

    Awesome
    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well done you!! I loved this poem, it was just the language through out and the amazing images that I got to my mind. Right from the first line to the very last, each of them holding their own unique image. You desrcibed the situations at christmas time including the fact that people put aside their differences for this one day so they can all enjoy it together. This is true for most families I think.

    Excellent job and a well deserved win xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh how cool!!!! The snowman is adorable! Natasha this piece was absolutly breathtaking... and congratulations, well deserved win!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh how cool!!!! The snowman is adorable! Natasha this piece was absolutly breathtaking... and congratulations, well deserved win!!!!