Comments : Fearlessness

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this Saffie!!!! OMG It is brilliant.
    Good on you for writing this piece, the message behind it is such a deep and powerful one, never be afraid because fear always makes it harder to live.

    Just breathtaking, and I love how it came full circle at the end with the repetition, and once again, the imagery was just perfection...

    xxx LOVE IT!

  • 11 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow!!! I love this poem! It's sooo inspiring! The title caught my eye. I love the idea of fearlessness. It's a quality I wish I had more of. I must say everything you described in this poem was exhilarating, and things people don't normally do.

    I have a few suggestions..

    "Staring haunting demons"
    ^^ did you mean staring at haunting demons ?

    "to awaken it's memory. "
    ^^ change it's to its.

    I must say this was my favorite stanza:

    Unlocking the old dusty box
    that my past has been sleeping in
    because it is now time
    to awaken it's memory.

    ^^ I love it because it made me think of an old box with your ex's things or things that remind you of him. and how going through that box is not scary or hard anymore.. because you've moved on and accepted that it's over. This is just where my mind drifted off to!

    And of course the ending... so simple yet powerful. I absolutely love this poem. Keep on being fearless!!! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    The imagery here is brilliant. I like the title. you wrote it really good. my favorite line is"Standing before the devil
    and his thorny whipping tail,
    as I paint him blue with defeat
    and watch him melt away. " its so deep