Okay this poem is cute to read my dear friend! :) i love the part where it says..."The school phoned me to come there by next day
but they did not tell why they need me for
My son reached home but he was not okay
"I didn't steal any money." He swore"
since every child says that and yet the parents don't believe them when they actually tell the truth... well for mine anyhow lol i really enjoyed the emotions i felt in this piece and the images i saw in my head were sweet too! :) 5/5 my dear friend!!!

Queen Ash

A different piece. And the message it gives out is good as well. I liked the poem. A nice attempt:)

A very interesting subject, I enjoyed reading this, although I felt the rhyme scheme was very strained. As usual though, I love reading your poems!