This was sweet and romantic, there was a beautiful tone to the piece, it felt dreamy and I enjoyed reading it,

another fine piece, Chels
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Your bed of dreams is the cloud... fluffy softness and pure love... Oh I love the metaphor with this one... You do know how to captivate the reader!

The new freshness of a captivation, love to be... reminds me of the giddiness I have felt, still feel with James... Oh this is romantic at it's finest!!

I love this one. The style is amazing, the descriptions are stunning and it all has wonderful displays or emotion..I really like your word choice and your metaphor. Well done. Great piece.

This is one of those pieces that just instantly bring a smile on my face. It's romantic, dreamy and just overall beautiful.

You're nervous at first, because of love that may have once burned you...but can't help but fall in love with this person. They make you feel like you are living on cloud nine with just a simple kiss.

The last stanza is my absolutely favorite! <3

Lovely imagery! I really enjoyed this, and I'm sorry that I haven't gotten to your poems yet. But I can see that I've been missing out.

You excel in this genre, and your imagery always teases senses, at least with me it does. I felt like I was floating as I reading this, and the format made the flow look that way too. This is very romantic and heartwarming, and even people who don't like love poems will probably love this. Great work!

Petrified, nervous, scared of heights, yet,
I find myself soaring to new heavens that
even the sky can't find. Living in the dream
world where clouds can catch me.

- great opening - listing the feelings of that anxiety and leaving us to wonder why you have it. I love the idea of there being heavens even the sky cant find - like there are no words to describe this, heaven is just not enough to fit it! Then the clouds catching you - chels, that is just awesome. So unique and dreamy and innocent.

An instant reaction from when your
lips meet mine, I decline.
Back first, I faint in an unintentional
attempt to fall in love with you, it's true.

- I really like the wording here and how you begin to bring the love into the poem and explain the journey to your readers from the beginning. Slight tone of insecurity here but then the love is so powerful that you fell for it when you didn't even want to or mean to - a sign of true love.

Plush pillows soften my collision
and I roll around embracing their
comfort. You supervise my delightfulness
and smile as you know this is your doing.

- wow, very sweet. To faint and land on clouds, it is like you can never be hurt here, like no matter where you fall these clouds will protect you because this love is just out of this world in a different more secure place than any other. You really do paint a picture of heaven here.

Our foreheads touch and all that's
quietly conveyed is trust, between us.
Slipping unknowingly into a coma,
so sweet, so rare, we stare.

- this is beautiful, it shows silence for what it can be in the form of love - no words needed, we can see it all in each other's eyes. The trust is so important and to feel this without any words being exchanged is so powerful chels.

All I want to do is lay forever
on this mattress that overlooks
the world, float above precipitation,
and live in a place where it never rains
over the head of our romance.

- mattress above the world??? awww. very very sweet. I love the idea of being even higher than the rain so nothing can ever ruin this moment, there is just pure heaven. Total peace and tranquillity.

Excellent poem chels, very dreamy and romantic but also very peaceful in its tone.

Oh my heavens. This is absolutely cute. jakhsdkasdg AND IT'S POEMS LIKE THIS, that make me realize that it sucks to be forever alone. xD It's seriously adorable.

"Petrified, nervous, scared of heights, yet,
I find myself soaring to new heavens that
even the sky can't find. Living in the dream
world where clouds can catch me."

^^I love it when the whole title is incorporated into a piece. You did that nicely. The first two lines are what had me sold. I love that you use heights for a metaphor for falling in love. It's takes you higher and higher. Almost to the point where it can be scary.

"An instant reaction from when your
lips meet mine, I decline.
Back first, I faint in an unintentional
attempt to fall in love with you, it's true."

^There is a shyness to the wording. It's darling. The nervousness makes this more actually human than the pieces that are just like "Welp, I just fell in love without any emotion BUT love."

"Plush pillows soften my collision
and I roll around embracing their
comfort. You supervise my delightfulness
and smile as you know this is your doing."

^Imagery. I love it. It's so cute. kjasdhakjhsd THIS WHOLE POEM = CUTE.

"Our foreheads touch and all that's
quietly conveyed is trust, between us.
Slipping unknowingly into a coma,
so sweet, so rare, we stare."

^^Ooooh, it's a loooove coma. And it's sooo akshjadkajsdhacute. This poem is making me typerventilate like a lunatic. IT IS BEYOND DARLING. I love the foreheads touching. It's intimate, but platonic, but sweet, but also warm and I just cANT EVEN OMG.

"All I want to do is lay forever
on this mattress that overlooks
the world, float above precipitation,
and live in a place where it never rains
over the head of our romance. "

^This was a lovely way to wrap things up. Nothing can bother you, nothing comes between you, or rains on your parade.

Love. This.