Taylor- you penned a wonderful end of the world piece here, my hats off to you.. this was truly awesome....

I really enjoyed this poem, I thought you done well for the challenge and congrats.

Your wording creates such vivid images and metaphors here that I can clearly see in my head and they jump out so powerfully through out the poem, well done.

Very chilling piece, a reminder to us all to make the most of every minute we have, the imagery and scene setting in this is brillliant, I feel you captured the essence of your title very well.
An interesting read.
well done,

Nice word choice that fit altogether in each stanza. Ending the poem with a question like "Who will remember us..." makes this poem unique in style. Thank you for sharing that with us.