I can't take much more

by HiddenScars   Dec 21, 2012


Blood is pouring
I am crying
My heart is broken
I am dying
the pain is my own
I can't take much more
My wounds have been sown
I'm dead on the floor

**This was written by someone who was really close to me. I'm pretty sure he wrote it himself. I'm not sure where he's at now, last time I heard from him he was in the hospital with a chance of dying from a suicide attempt that I could've prevented. I'm sharing his work because he never had a chance to.

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow wow wow I loved the way you put it, it pulled me so far into the writing, wonderful poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Natasha

    Agreed, good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    No word to say.
    But good work & pain full poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    No word to say.
    But good work & pain full poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very well written, though sad