by Autumn Leaves Dec 21, 2012
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
You are able to read me without the |
by Marcy Lewis
Ah! Double posts. I'm so sorry! |
by Marcy Lewis
I love this poem. It's incredibly relatable for many people. It could be about a lover, parent, friend, outsider of any kind. Either way, we feel at some point, there is always that person who never fails to make you feel like total crap about yourself. |
Thank you:) |
Nice metaphor and similes you gave over here. The use of light and darkness is appropriate in my opinion. Some tenses have to be rechecked like "have awaken" and "has allow" which I think should be "have awakened" and "has allowed". I loved your in writing your thoughts in a nice simple flow, it's attractive. |
by DeafBeats
"Why do you persist on flashing your |
Thank you for your comment and I have edited this poem. I am always ready to make improvements and I want this poem to be meaningful because it's the way I felt. Thanks again. |