This is sad, definitely. But still, it doesn't stop me
from reading it over and over again. Great work..!

This is a work of art, a thing of the school, a expression of what you feel within, I enjoyed reading it, great work

I can follow the drift here, but I really struggle with the form.
It is not accessable in reading, for me.
But the content is brilliant

The emotion here is well portrayed. Don't give up!