I don't quite understand this poem. but what I got out of it is this guy is going to jail . and jail is taking over him.

I like it. The way its written, short and somewhat intriguing, educational in some ways for you used some words a normal poetry reader doesnt normally see. That adds to the interesting part. Really good.

Written somewhat as if you were responding to a Rorschach image but grittier, more what stream-of-conscience meets adult comic would produce.
Between the flies of hades and the water of angels you depict the dictator, of mind, of Rome, of an olio of meaning which purposefully obscures. Institutionalized one is most in need of cover.