Bridge of Hope

by ah satan 666   Dec 22, 2012


The sky shows off
a colourful bridge for me to walk across in hope,
as Richard of york gave a battle in vain.
But there's no fight to smile
when friends help you back on your feet again,
as the sun does shine through the rain.

~*<3*~
Thank you
Saffie
~*<3*~
.............................

Richard = Red, of = Orange, York = Yellow,
Gave = Green, A= Aqua, Battle = Blue,
In = Indigo, Vain = Violet...

All the colours of the rainbow.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Now this, I have to try! I love the Richard of York reference and your use of symbolizing your words as the colors of the rainbow. This is very unique, and as short as it is, it would've been very difficult for me to write. But I love seeing new work like this that challenges me to experiment and be a better writer.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wafaa

    I like the warmth of friendship here :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Cara

    Very nice, I loved the way you worded it and included the colors of the rainbow. Very creative piece of work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Natasha, this is so clever, I love it, thank you. Friendship is something very special and precious that we should treasure forever.

    Your words are beautiful and I love that there is a rainbow in it... now all we need is P&Q to have colour fonts :)

    xxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is brilliant! and its also a touching friendship poem... love the creativity within this piece Natasha!

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