A Rainbow To The Blind

Jim and I want to thank you Saffie, to allow this piece to be read for Momma P- love you <3

I really liked your perception on indigo too, this is one of my favorite colors and I think it's really poetic as well! But the "middle place between your happiness and your fears", really interesting and thoughtful, like how you see life, choosing a ground in which you can stand on and be at peace. I also liked how you ended with hope, with that reminder. Wonderful write and I love the emotion in which you have portrayed too, color can be easily overlook but what would we miss if we know it then it disappeared from us? If we were blind, what would the colors mean to us?

Great write! :]

I was surprised Saffie, each colors designates a meaning and reflections suggesting of your favorite panorama, all colours are carefully arranged remembering me of V-I-B-G-Y-O-R when i was in elementary, i failed the subject for rumbling the colors=)

"Indigo is for that middle place between your
happiness and your fears."
^
Loved this, and the ending.

The title is so well-written. Keep it up. :)

'I may not be able to see what you do
but oh what a beautiful sight.'

^I absolutely love this. The whole poem is so refreshing and brings warmth to the heart. 5/5