by CathyButterflyJC Dec 24, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
new love
To a very special couple who hopefully will get to see the whole world together. They are a part of my life whether they like it or not, and I will goo and ga over their romantic moments and stress when one of them isn't alright. What I'd give to have what they have. I hope they know they are LUCKY. |
by Treehugger
Wow, This is wonderfully written Cathy. where do I start? The raw passion and emotion of two people in love sparkle with your words. Everyone goes through ups and downs in a relationship and sometimes The love someone has will never be broken. All your stanzas flow together in one. I loved loved loved the dialogue between the two lovers. It had realism into the poem. I wouldnt change a thing with this. 5/5 you are fantastic! |
by Wild flower
That us really nice of you to write this for them. Good job:) |
by Francisco
I love it so much nd i like how u put wat we sed in our conversation nd now she isokay!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by Francisco
OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGG IIIIIIIIIILLLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thnk you so much |