Angelic Resemblance [String Haibuns]

by Khalid M Darwish   Dec 24, 2012


The first human sin was committed as a result of envy between Adams sons, leading to murderer. Since then, this became something hereditary. Diluting the quarrel between any two can give birth for a new unique relationship.

Live humanity -
A rose, a smile, I love you
Find them in your heart

Roaming around, nothing emulates helping people having disabilities. Removing the feeling of hopelessness from their minds is important, even with nice words or presents which may mean a lot to them.

Leave all behind you -
astray, delusion and pride
Favors delete sins

As long as there're black-heart people there'd be sweet-heart people. This can erase all the evils committed in the past.

Build your hereafter -
Pushing your goods straightforward
Using your better

Imagine every one living in peace as the main target for human beings, with love everywhere and no place for hate. No need for the human laws, courts, judges or wars.

A world free of sins -
Live where no place for hatred
One leader's enough

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* Haibun is a form poetry comprising of a prose travel piece followed by a related haiku. The travel piece is restricted similarly to the haiku: the invisible observer, reflective of nature and seasonally set, sensual and with a change-up, not so much of an "aha" as the haiku, but a change of direction giving greater reflection or perspective. The haiku provides a new meaning to the prose piece. it might be referred to as the saucer where the prose is the teacup which settles into place.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    This is very unusual it is very clearly poetry yet it could also read as a speech, the fact doesn't leave very much room for emotion although I like that in this piece. It flows perfectly.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    One leader is enough, I am assuming that leader will be God?

    I like the part about where there is bad people there are good people. There is always a balance, everything needs to be balance out. Even the good people need some type of malice in order to survive. In the sense, that good people may be able to balance their life with it.

    I like the haikus. This piece sounds like it was easy to write but after I noticed the haikus, no way it was that easy. Good thoughts and also good flow.