Comments : Angelic Resemblance [String Haibuns]

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    One leader is enough, I am assuming that leader will be God?

    I like the part about where there is bad people there are good people. There is always a balance, everything needs to be balance out. Even the good people need some type of malice in order to survive. In the sense, that good people may be able to balance their life with it.

    I like the haikus. This piece sounds like it was easy to write but after I noticed the haikus, no way it was that easy. Good thoughts and also good flow.

  • 11 years ago

    by Adelle

    This is very unusual it is very clearly poetry yet it could also read as a speech, the fact doesn't leave very much room for emotion although I like that in this piece. It flows perfectly.