Comments : Fake Families

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Your tone in the beginning of this poem was sad, then you ended it in a positive way, which I didnt expecy.
    Flawless great job^_^

  • 11 years ago

    by Wafaa

    I loved how it begins with a feeling of loneliness and being pushed away by a family that wants perfection ignoring the existence of mistakes and flaws.. it's all just a play 'we are who we pretend to be'.. Then it ends with a sheer of hope and the fact that you are okay now that you find those who will accept you for who you are, not perfect.
    awesome write!

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    This poem actually sounded dark, instead of sad, I read it in an angry tone. I mean the content is sad. However, the over all tone sounded more darkish.

    There is a small typo:

    Soemone who won't hide me away

    ^
    Someone.

    In some cases, one finds a family where there is no blood relation.
    But we all know realize what the true meaning of family is.