Comments : Salt and Pepper

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Beautiful poetry my sweets. hugs and love x

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I dont know how you write like this, so perfectly so great, yet your words portray your true feelings.
    There's something about this poem that makes me love it so this is nominated.
    Awesome job.
    I wish I could write like you:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Double post soryy!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wafaa

    It's like a storm of mixed emotions and sadness felt deep in the soul.. I loved the last stanza where you incorporated the smile.

    beautiful as always x :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    Great! Sleep usually resets my mind when the night and emotions come together to taunt my thoughts.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Peppery smile and the salty ages of the soul. brought an spice into life. I wondered what was the relation to the title and I now see it. It's warm, at least that's how I felt when I finished reading this piece.