Peaceful death

by Aubrey   Dec 25, 2012


The air I breath is like poison
Suffocating me
Making me short of breath
I can't stop to think
My world spins
I can't take the increase of pain I feel
through out my body
I can feel it
The end
They say death is peaceful
Easy
And don't have the complications of life
So maybe this is the end
And maybe,just maybe
I could be free.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is amazing work. I hope you pulled through this time in your life coz no situation is permanent...jus check on a few punctuations here and there so it flows even better.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Thanks....I look over it:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Aw...this is so sad sweetie sometimes we can feel so low that it seems as if the ground we are standing on is crumbling. Painful times are challenging but when face them we realize we much stronger than we thought.

    Great expressions.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Thanks....your the only one who seems to like them lately....: )

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Thanks....your the only one who seems to like them lately....: )

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    This poem was was hard to put up....it talks about a hard time in my life....I know it doesent make since.... but its how I felt.....

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