This poem was was hard to put up....it talks about a hard time in my life....I know it doesent make since.... but its how I felt.....

Aw...this is so sad sweetie sometimes we can feel so low that it seems as if the ground we are standing on is crumbling. Painful times are challenging but when face them we realize we much stronger than we thought.

Great expressions.

This is amazing work. I hope you pulled through this time in your life coz no situation is permanent...jus check on a few punctuations here and there so it flows even better.