Comments : I'm a winter son [senryu]

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The moon rays are pale, yet the night sky lights up, adding beauty to the precious moon. I like this senryu, for it speaks of friendships with a touch of sorrow or yearning and it also has beautiful nature tones, which I love... very pretty piece!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    For MT has said suffice, my addon is: this piece speaks excellence and truly an apt example of friendship.
    Keep writing(: