Elements of Success and Elements of Failure [Tanka]

I love itttt!!! What a nice inspiring and motivating poem!!! I love how you compared optimistic and pessimistic people. I'm an eternal optimist so this was such a joy to read. I really like this subject... because a lot of people complain and groan about everything such as their jobs, instead of doing something about it... for ex applying for other jobs or trying to ask for a promotion etc. I really found this inspiring.

Great job! =D