by Aubrey
Very nice....I like the description: ) |
Haha thanks :) |
This poem has a sadness within every line, I appreciate the details you entwined in this write like " Darkness that is more of an envelope" and "The sun crest over your mountains but it only helps little". These two lines stands out, from reading this I interpret that this person here brings you a temporary pleasure with many pains attach. |
Thank you kindly :) correct interpretation |
by L
I like the vocab... Wintry, decadence, and season! Actually many more words but those are the ones I remember. |
Thanks, and yes. |
by Aubrey
This is really good.....you give such good a good imaginary pictures.... when you write.... great job:) |
Thanks :) I try |