Comments : Bitter After-taste

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Very nice....I like the description: )

    great poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This poem has a sadness within every line, I appreciate the details you entwined in this write like " Darkness that is more of an envelope" and "The sun crest over your mountains but it only helps little". These two lines stands out, from reading this I interpret that this person here brings you a temporary pleasure with many pains attach.

    Great write.

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I like the vocab... Wintry, decadence, and season! Actually many more words but those are the ones I remember.

    I also think the same as autumbre on the interpretation but lol. I already know it's right.

    Also one can deduce this from the title ... Bitter after taste. .. However, it seems this someone like bitter and darkness instead of light and sweet. Who understands people?

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    This is really good.....you give such good a good imaginary pictures.... when you write.... great job:)