Most of your poems are always sad but you penned well with lovable lines,
nice written..

Thanks.

Wow, wow, I really loved this poem, you are an amazing writer, I love the poem, you really poured your heart out and expressed your feelings, perfectly, this is such a SAD poem, I almost cried! 100/100

I like the metaphor really badly since it's really nice way to say "spit it out don't be shy and uncomfortable" lol but besides that i really love the emotions coming off from this poem the pain is there and it's intense yet in a way you can see a little part of yourself in this poem for many have had this in their lives no if ands or buts sorry folks we all know we have this in our lives at least some part! 5/5 great poem sweetie

Queen Ash

I love the penultimate stanza - brilliant flow and crescendo to a great piece