This is a sweet poem, I like the title of this poem it fits perfectly with the content. I also feel like you are speaking to God I maybe wrong but this is what I conclude from reading your poem. |
by Adelle
Like Autumn, I feel, this poem reads as having religious/spiritual connotations you say a lot without the need for many words. I believe this to be a skill possessed by those with a true gift for writing. |
by Amreen
This poem is lovely and has a profound meaning behind it. |
This is a short but wonderful poem and speaks wonders to the readers heart, and is enjoyable to all. It speaks of the heart in a whole new way, speaking of the storm within and the raging emotions, feelings and loves. |