What's Your Impression? [Tanka]

by Khalid M Darwish   Dec 27, 2012


I wrote on my door -
"Leave hypocrisy outside,
you are most welcome"
but no one visited me!
Can you give your impression?

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I wrote on my door -
    "Leave hypocrisy outside,
    you are most welcome"
    but no one visited me!
    Can you give your impression?

    haha.. a twist? if they were hypocrites they would have entered regardless of the sign.

    If they didn't enter then they didn't have any hypocrisy?

    Well done sir, it will depend on the individual.