Wow you amaze me with this poem. You have great talent and i look forward to you adding more! hayley xx

Wow, unbelievable poem! That was amazing. You rhyme your words together very well, absolutely loved it. I think it's very deep and sad. Good job! Oh and thanks for your lovely comment, much appreciated :0)

thanx everyone.. I wrote this poem at school one day then, after a while when I found this website I decided to put it there. Im glad that you all like it. this is one of my fav poems that I have written.

I can see why it's your favouriet poem because it's amazing! Sad but very good!
Keep iy up:)
xoxox

no im not a cutter... when im really sad I write instead

great poem ya im kinda late on commenting but hey better late then never awesome poem
Dee