This is a really great poem, I enjoyed reading it sooo much, I love how the verse said so much in so little, beautiful, I specially loved
"And they stay there,
a magic moment we share"
as well as
"He whispers come here,
while crouching on the floor,
putting his arm around you,
with a look you adore."
specially specially the second one.
I really liked how you made feelings within tingle, and a heart stir