by L
Odd soldier, standing in the middle of a firing squad, Was he conspiring with his life? |
This poem has a strange sense of humor, I'm just wondering did the soldier burn his tongue or get into trouble for saying something he shouldn't have said? |
by Amreen
This is funny as the imagery you set here is hilarious and the action of his tongue and I could picture him of how funny he could be, though I don't get the relevancy of the title with the content, but still I like the picturization. |
I love this type of poems, short and brief but powerful, bearing a strong message. I could imagine this happening with the soldier with his tongue going south. |
by awww
It was so short I had to read it again and again. Trying to get the meaning of your write. For some odd reason, what I came up with was that he killed himself. It's like he commanded the firing squad to shoot him. Anyway, that's just my interpretation. And for leaving me still confused (and I'll probably be thinking about it), I give this a 5. |