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by Donnie Dec 29, 2012 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
Not a day that passes I don't see your face, your grin your laughter that carried us to another place. Not having you here is hard as hell I often look to the sky and yell. Your on my mind and in my heart, not even your death will tear us apart. You made us laugh and made us cry,that day you visit the man in the sky. Oh don't worry, will see you again. Just be at the gates as we walk in! R.I.P DAD! I love you and miss you.
by Amreen
This is saddening! I really love the emotions of your piece but keep it structured to make it look like a poem rather than a paragraph. And the flow is good! Keep writing:)
by Donnie
Think this is more like what you were asking for?