Lol Clark one thing that completely bothered me and I must say it now is.... WHERE ARE THE STANZAS lol this would flow and look so much better with stanza's babe!
But now for the good stuff lol, I like that you compared scars to stars, that was brillant. and
Look at the stars
Just look back at what was ours
The star I picked for you still shines bright
What a lonely night it is tonight