Forbidden kiss

Heyyy. This leaves much to the imagination. Which is good. It is over all a cute poem. The rhythm was well balanced. Very excellent job with this one. :p

This is really great, Aubrey. The idea of forbidden love/forbidden relationship is so alluring. I think as humans we want what we can't have. I can definitely relate to this poem right now.

It's a really sweet poem, nicely done (:

I also agree this is a cute poem, a forbidden kiss. I guess there is not mch to do other than to wonder how it will be because it's forbidden.

This poem is so cute that it made me smile. I love the way you questioned the after effects that this forbidden kiss will have on you.

I wonder was there a small typo when you typed " I should not wonder if other will be" I was wondering did you meant to say " I shouldn't wonder whether it will be" but any way this is a sweet and romantic poem.

One last thought I think you meant to say delicious not delisious.

Cute poem..

I wrote this to expand my poetry..... this is my first attempt at this type of writing..... so I hope you like it...