Comments : Love on a guitar

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such a romantic idea for a love poem, nicely worded. Good job.

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    How sweet is this poem...

    "I wish I could be your guitar,
    And you are my guitarist,
    And so we can share the same tunes,
    just like the love we both share."

    ^^I love the guitar analogy for two people coming together...
    Harmonious and natural...
    Without one another, there would be no music... Beautifully worded.

    I also love the way you've set different moods within the poem, just like music sets a tone...as you tell your tail of love...

    I had the imagery of a romantic evening playing through your medley of words :)

    Beautiful write Edward