by Rusheena Jan 3, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
As I sip the same cup of coffee I've had since this morning, |
by myonlymoon
I really loved this piece, it took me to my job actually- where, although, i don't drink coffee- i often sip of hot choocolate and let my mind wander itself. This piece touched a certain level with me, and by finish I felt comforted and at ease. I really enjoyed reading this. Fantastic job! |
by Rusheena
Thanks! |
I loved the begining of each stanza, so powerful. I like the expression of "stained teeth" it's very funny. |
by Rusheena
Haha, thanks! Glad you liked it! |
I liked this piece , really well written |
by Rusheena
Thanks! |
by Mohan
Very different poem, |
by Rusheena
Thanks! I didn't really know where I was going with this one, so I put it on the shelf for over a year and finally decided to finish it. Glad you liked it. :) |