Comments : Coffee and Fortune Cookies

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Very different poem,
    I realy enjoyed this.

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks! I didn't really know where I was going with this one, so I put it on the shelf for over a year and finally decided to finish it. Glad you liked it. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I liked this piece , really well written
    I agree it is diffrent but very nicely done

    Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    I loved the begining of each stanza, so powerful. I like the expression of "stained teeth" it's very funny.
    This is really great poem. 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Haha, thanks! Glad you liked it!

  • 11 years ago

    by myonlymoon

    I really loved this piece, it took me to my job actually- where, although, i don't drink coffee- i often sip of hot choocolate and let my mind wander itself. This piece touched a certain level with me, and by finish I felt comforted and at ease. I really enjoyed reading this. Fantastic job!