Comments : THE STORY OF A WANDERER

  • 11 years ago

    by WILLOW

    I can identify with this being my brother. I can thankfully say this poem gave another insight to how he may feel wandering the streets.

    • 11 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Thanks for your interesting comment, I can't say that this poem resembles a lot in my life, in fact hardly any but I hope you enjoyed it and that your brother gets along someday with society. And here is the other two parts that no one probably expected which I hope empowers the rest, makes it more complete and interesting to you!

  • 11 years ago

    by Gabriel

    Okay here is the complete poem with all three parts I wrote them a long time ago but didn't feel like they were ready until I fixed them up a bit which is what they are now!

    By the way if anyone is wondering what lark means it means: a merry, carefree adventure.

  • 11 years ago

    by LostForWords

    Very powerful. I felt for the wanderer, from the beginning of his journey, through spending time in strife, to finding somewhere he could could call home.

    Good job.