by WILLOW
I can identify with this being my brother. I can thankfully say this poem gave another insight to how he may feel wandering the streets. |
by Gabriel
Thanks for your interesting comment, I can't say that this poem resembles a lot in my life, in fact hardly any but I hope you enjoyed it and that your brother gets along someday with society. And here is the other two parts that no one probably expected which I hope empowers the rest, makes it more complete and interesting to you! |
by Gabriel
Okay here is the complete poem with all three parts I wrote them a long time ago but didn't feel like they were ready until I fixed them up a bit which is what they are now! |
by LostForWords
Very powerful. I felt for the wanderer, from the beginning of his journey, through spending time in strife, to finding somewhere he could could call home. |
by Gabriel
Thanks |