The hots

by sun spots   Jan 3, 2013


The daily grind of work,
earning just to pay the bills.
When i get home,
i like to relax and just chill.
You tell me how your day has been,
and i tell mine to you.
And as the evening goes on,
i get the hots for you.
You look really good,
and you smell oh so nice.
Your skin is so soft to touch,
you are so beautiful and your in my life.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    This is what i dream of for the future! Its true love

    • 11 years ago

      by sun spots

      When i first saw my girl i new she was the one. I was 19 she was 17. We went out for two years, got engaged, made plans then she broke it off.
      28 years later we find each other again and recently decided to live together and we are so happy. You know who that person is when you see them for the first time.

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awh!!!! i can see what's happening in this short poem!!! maybe it's that i have a fiance or maybe it's the fact that i want this in my future so i have dreamed for it for YEARS but idk why but i LOVE this poem since it's super super sweet and loving 5/5 sweetie and i nominated it! :)

    Queen Ash

    • 11 years ago

      by sun spots

      Thanks, that's really very kind of you. All this poem writing is quite new to me, i just started over a year ago. I guess you know why.

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