Meme, I was struck with the unique form you used here. It flowed really well and I loved the message it told.
Really nicely penned piece.
X

I loved this Meme....it wasn't necessarily the rhyming pattern I usually see and that's what made me love it. I read this twice because the first time I was just so into the flow I read it too quick. Lol. The second time I got sucked into the story and felt instantly saddened. Relationships that fall apart is so hard to go through especially when we hear that promise of "no matter what, we'll pull through"....and that promise doesn't remain kept.

Beautiful though Meme. Because your ending rings true. The end of relationships make us realize things we didn't see before. That people were someone we never knew. Which means the end is what was needed. Who wants to be with someone you never knew?

Well penned.

I really enjoyed your rhyme scheme; I've never seen a poem formatted this way. Great job, Meme!

Really, Really Good. Your Writing is Amazing Meme.

Great work Meme, It shows the breakdown of what we thought wa something perfect and someone we loved, and the change of when they turn into someone we feel as a stranger to us, We wonder if we ever knew them, like they have been swapped with a total different person. We question ourselves about how we could ever love someone like this and how someone could go from one extreme to the other.

You captured this well and I liked your flow and the rhyme throughout, it defiantly could be turned into a song or rap.

Great work x

Meme- Your talent makes me smile, but your heart gives me strength... You have this elegant way of placing your heart into pieces, anointing a poem with a flash of creativity and then you top it off with a powerful rhyme scheme...
love this piece!

the message is clear to me... and its inspirational as well... a broken heart can overcome and shine once again... beautiful!

Meme- Your talent makes me smile, but your heart gives me strength... You have this elegant way of placing your heart into pieces, anointing a poem with a flash of creativity and then you top it off with a powerful rhyme scheme...
love this piece!

the message is clear to me... and its inspirational as well... a broken heart can overcome and shine once again... beautiful!

Miss rhyme does it again ,

Your talent is jumping off the page
Awesome meme just awesome

LOVE the last part. Always great reads from you. I haven't been on in so long. I'm wondering if you remember me.....