Wow, thats was good. well doen its really
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VERY NICE!!!! i love the way it was placed but maybe you should center it so it looks more beautiful!!! i like the way the dark truth is made beautiful in this poem for me it is always a choice to truthful and a neccary to fake the emotions on my face 5/5 sweeteie

Queen Ash

I agree center 5/5

I enjoyed the poem. it has a lot of emotions.

This, the emotion of almost or barely losing a friend is pretty strong. Every words describe the situation I had with my former bestie. But life does goes on. And this poem, is a beautiful piece. I love it! 5/5