Comments : Painful Existence

  • 11 years ago

    by Swallowing Tongues

    Beauitful poem. sad but excellently written

  • 11 years ago

    by Texas Battle

    Fantasties

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    This is another excellent poem by you <3.

    My favourite stanza is

    This is not a life
    It's an existence
    Bring me a knife
    I'll take it with no resistance

    Because when we all feel like we dont belong. it feels like we are just existing. Life is a struggle with everything. Sometimes it feels like you cant be saved but we arethe ones that an save ourselves. 5

  • 11 years ago

    by Valenttina

    I think it's sad but empowering for you because you've decided to just accept "what is" without fighting to change it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is beautiful...

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is beautiful...

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is beautiful...