Comments : Letter To God

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    He is always there for us when we need him and even when he don't. Who are we for Him to be in our presence? or for Him to show us His face?

    However, he always hear us and listens to us. We just have to believe and have faith in Him.

    A Good write, it makes the reader think that one usually seeks the lord when we need him, instead of every day.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Appropriate title since it is like a letter written to God. Heartfelt because it came from your heart directed to the Most High. The first stanza was a very good opening. As I read the 2nd stanza I was turned off by the addressing of God as Daddy. I would have liked to have seen you use "Father" here instead. Still the stanza was real good but the word Daddy just felt wrong.

    Still a nice piece.

    He is always there.

    Lostlove~