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This is really interesting. I feel like you are at war with yourself throughout this. Like you want to get away, leave for good and get away from everything that is dragging you down but something keeps pulling you back, maybe something inside yourself. That may be a completely wrong interpretation, but after reading it a couple times that was all I could see.

I wanna cut these ropes and take off for the ocean,
Swim until I can find no ground,
Break away from all frustration.
But somehow the ocean doesn't swallow me down,
It spits me up like indigestion.

^^This is really deep, probably my favorite part. And the main reason I came to the conclusion above. Nicely Written.

This poem is very sad and heartbreaking. Its true sometimes we want to get away from the places we are so familiar with. I think you feel a need to get away from your problems and people that are associate with them.

I think you're saying I want to die, but the ground won't allow me in..you're also stating your frustrations with life and yourself.

Great emotions...