A wish expressed that many of us would love to have come true. You words are full of emotion and feelings and the reader can feel them. Very nice.

On a technical note, kiss and lips don't really rhyme. If you were to change the last line of verse to "and the warmth of your lips, I miss. Second verse, line 3 "theres s/b there's. Second verse, line 4 and third verse, line 3 the word "your s/b either you're or you are.

Beautifully worded and expressed ~ I loved it!

A Gem :)

... Keep up the good work Robert! :D

Good poem. . Filled with emotions . It's truly sensual. . Keep up the good work friend.

You know this would make a nice little greeting card for Valentine's day :) A heartfelt emotion nicely expressed.

Great write friend. Your poem took my mind on a romantic drive with beautiful images :)

Loved it.

all the best & take care

This poem has a wonderful feeling to it. The warm intimate feeling to be lying so cozily with a lover combined with your joy makes this so uplifting to read. Well done!